Help with diagram, please?

[Cheetham, Anastasia]

I have two versions of a diagram intended to convey a concept, and I'm not sure which one does a better job. I'm wondering if people could help me out by looking at the two and commenting on their thoughts?

http://wiki.fluidproject.org/display/docs/Diagram+Test+Page

If you have thoughts, please respond to this thread.

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Anastasia Cheetham     Inclusive Design Research Centre
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