Draft report for Mellon Retreat please review
colin.clark at utoronto.ca
Mon Feb 11 17:57:29 UTC 2008
A few ideas:
* For the Specific Project Goals section, should we use a more present-
tense, active tone? For example, "Fluid is creating an architectural
framework..." rather than the future tense we are currently using?
* A minor point, but shall we go ahead and refer to the project as
"Fluid" in mixed case rather than the upper case we used to use prior
to the project getting under way?
* I really like your emphasis on pragmatics in the Marketing and
On 11-Feb-08, at 10:50 AM, Jutta Treviranus wrote:
> Hi all,
> Attached is the draft Fluid report for the Mellon retreat. The
> suggested length is 4 to 5 pages. The report is 9 pages but I have
> not compressed the formatting. Some of the initial stuff is directly
> from the proposal to Mellon (with minor corrections). It is due today.
> Please send me any edits or additions by 3pm ET today and I will try
> to incorporate them.
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